Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets Other people prefer to do their food shopping online Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The importance of grocery shopping in a household which was always debatable has now become more controversial. Few folks prefer to purchase edibles online such as vegetables and fruits while others personally visit to greengrocers and local shops for fine qualityof food. In my opinion, latter proposition appears to be more rational. this essay will discuss both the arguments and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
there are myriad of reasons which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems from the fact that visiting to a supermarket can be really advantageous and shoppers can check the quality and quantity of the products. people can check whether the food items are fresh or not. another pivotal aspect in this regard is that buyers can buy the products at bargain price from the local market. During the summer seasons, certain fruits come in abundance and vendors sell their items at reasonable rates to avoid storing the leftover stock. Finally, it is a leisure time activity for elderly masses who otherwise do not go anywhere out to get some fresh breeze. Needless to say, all these merits stand in a good stead.

As per the another school of thought, e-shopping offers more merits for various reasons. First of all, suppliers deliver the goods at doorsteps which means there is no need to step outside. In other words, it is not only feasible for elderly and disabled but also for tele commuters who have hectic schedules. Besides, shoppers can enjoy eating veggies from other parts of the country. As local markets only sell native products, whereas one can buy non- native edibles from online shopping websites. For instance, in norther India people get dragon fruit from grocers shops online because it is not sold in the market. Hence, it is apparent why many are ij favour of this trend.

To culminate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, I can reach to a conclusion that although e shopping of food does provide some benefits yet the pros of purchasing food stuff from the supermarket are too great to ignore.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, hence, really, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99426934097 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55207743527 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618911174785 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2634884238 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275416973617 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701216250807 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681321508108 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160315473519 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468989615616 0.056905535591 82% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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