Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
There are many change had been done such as stone age to technological era, telephone to mobile phone, radio to television etc. Some people do not like changes and other think that changes may lead to success. I personally believe that changes are necessary for life. I will discuss more in further paragraph.
On one hand, some people argue that changes are not important for life because it can unbalance their routine. Also, people feel comfort with daily life style thus, people avoid changes. In this modern era, electric media is most important part of life but it is hard to adopt for senior citizen because lack of knowledge. For instance, almost people prefer to use e-newspaper rather than printed paper but old age people do not know how to use mobile. That type of changes is avoided by people.
On the other hand, some people feel changes as adventure of life. If a change does not happen in life then life will become boring. Moreover, “changes is low of life”, means changes are part of our life. For instance, children start learning in preschool then go to school and college. That means changes help us to learn new things, explore new ideas and often lead to success. To get success in life, people should have to develop new ideas, make progress in life. For example, Indian prime minister start policy for “clean India” and now India became clean as compared to past.
I believe that, changes are compulsory otherwise our lice become boring and dull. People can lost the adventure from their life and development could be stop.
- Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change Others however think that change is always a good thing Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 61
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- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun change seems to be countable; consider using: 'many changes'.
Suggestion: many changes
There are many change had been done such as stone age to tech...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ople feel changes as adventure of life. If a change does not happen in life then l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79925650558 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28996282528 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602230483271 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4853496329 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213420865466 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0849810263619 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764434079962 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146566564005 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528440370099 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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