Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Changes and adoption are an essential part of everyone's lives in order to achieve their goals. In this regard, some individuals try to avoid changes and want to follow a similar routine. However, others refuse it and argue that the alteration might be beneficial for individuals in both their professional and personal lives. This essay will explore both the former's and the latter's views prior to my own opinion.
According to the former, they do not want changes that may enhance their lives due to the fear of failure. In other words, they do not want to take a risk because they believe that if they fail to adopt changes, their efforts, money, time and energy will be wasted. As a result of this, they stick with their daily schedule and live life as it goes. Because of this belief, the majority of employees who work in corporations do not welcome new changes and learn new skills in their professional lives.
On the other hand, those who adopt change believe that adoption may bring new opportunities in their lives. To be more precise, they become versatile, more productive, able to work on their edge and compete with others in the era of competition. For instance, a report submitted by the Times of India, by surveying more than 10,000 students, depicts that nearly 80% of students prefer to go abroad for further education in order to acquire knowledge of the latest technologies and other soft skills, such as communication and time management, that are needed in professional life so that they can get high-paying jobs and a better life.
In conclusion, some people prefer living the same life without any change, while others like bringing alteration to every step of life. I believe that in contemporary times, where situations change rapidly, it is mandatory to make changes in life according to the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es in life according to the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89171974522 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64457033978 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550955414013 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.2328788868 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.153846154 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240715651874 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874305351986 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434666871488 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154338683842 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511354698969 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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