Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Change occurs in every aspect of people’s daily life, regardless of whether we want it to happen or not. Some people do not like changes, mainly because changes bring unfamiliarity, which means the possibility of making mistakes. Others, however, believe change is always a good thing. In my view, the majority of changes lead to positive results, and we should adapt and keep pace with them.
Change, per se is the only thing that never changes in the universe. Although we may avoid or deny some changes that could occur, we cannot stop the whole world from changing. So, it is wiser to face the reality, appreciate these changes, and try to make the most of them.
Moreover, some changes like scientific innovations, technological inventions, and new academic theories, are driving forces behind social progress. For example, modern information technology has already changed the world and the way people work, relax, communicate, and even receive education. It has also improved the productivity of many industries as well as our living standard.
This is not to say that nay changes end well. When we enjoy the benefits of changes, we sometimes lose more important things. Indeed, we have seen invaluable traditional cultural fade away, both people and animals have suffered from climate change, and we are trying our best to protect the environment and ecosystem from negative changes.
In summary, most changes are an inevitable fact of life and we had better develop an active attitude towards them. Meanwhile though, we have to preserve what we believe is valuable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...evelop an active attitude towards them. Meanwhile though, we have to preserve what we bel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in summary, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15891472868 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67385962027 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2227553125 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7333333333 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216459218078 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802642520264 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709138876633 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119750449463 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798459206111 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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