Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding
change.Others, however think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people consider that having a stable life without changes and adopting the same lifestyle throughout the whole life are their most desirable thing. However, I would argue that experiencing something new can allow our world be more meaningful and enrich our horizons.
For a start, there is a belief that changing the current situation will disrupt their present comfortable environment and bring them to a challenging world. They are convinced that it is unnecessary to step out their comfort zone because if you choose to confront with the change, it will have a possibility to bring some negative repercussions. For instance, choosing to resign the current job and pursue a new career that you have not worked before will fall victim to it. Therefore, it is safe to keep the original way to avoid something bad.
In sharp contrast, nonetheless, it seems to me that achieving new knowledge or experience can broaden people’s perspectives and find the meaning of life. living in a new nation’s neighborhood provides an opportunity to acquire new cultures, starting your own business allows you to practice your own ideas, expanding your social circle by communicating with others actively may give you unexpected help in the future. change is a path for us to attain a more plentiful life even the horrible experience can give you a guide to your life.
By way of conclusion, while a number of people afraid of the consequences of change, I would argue that change is always an energy to your life to encourage people live meaningfully.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...spectives and find the meaning of life. living in a new nation's neighborhood pro...
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Line 9, column 429, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Change
...give you unexpected help in the future. change is a path for us to attain a more plent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nonetheless, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09689922481 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94194217084 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2124486557 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16775210381 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599673433477 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554266817141 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102785205385 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364364178445 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.