Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Life is very short. We have to enjoy our life as much as we can by doing various exciting things. So, I prefer to spend lives by doing different things rather than doing the same things in whole life.
Life is sometimes boring sometimes exciting. The state of life depends on our decision to how we will spend our life. I myself totally disagree with those people who prefer to lives their life doing the same things. Doing the same things and avoiding change make our life boring. Boring life is totally the waste of a beautiful life. Though life is short, we should focus to make our life more interesting. If a person does the same things, he will lose interest in that things. Doing the same things will make him miserable and boring.
On other hand, Spend our life doing different things will make our life optimistic, enjoyable, exciting. I prefer to enjoy our life doing different things. Because, if we do different things in our life in the different period we will get a different taste and our life will be not boring. Suppose one main profession is banking, in his leisure time he can do other exciting things or he can change his job in different period of time for gaining experience. So, in our life doing different things will make our life more enjoyable, more beautiful, more exciting.
In the conclusion, According to my point of view, though life is not a long period of time I prefer to spend our life doing different things to make it more enjoyable rather than doing same things and making our lives boring.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 421, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...s or he can change his job in different period of time for gaining experience. So, in our lif...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...oint of view, though life is not a long period of time I prefer to spend our life doing differ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31507028257 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 176.041082164 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.389090909091 0.561755894193 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.4123007618 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4117647059 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.352941176471 7.06120827912 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229512776487 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110341604923 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11064868791 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191849611775 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266572640255 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.1 8.58950901804 71% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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