In this scientific era, technology paved the way of communicating.few masses opine that mobile phones and internet are helpful to stay in contact with other. However, other believe that a lot of time immense using cellphone and computer is a key factor of less face to face communication. Thare is advantages outweigh disadvantages in growing use of technology to communicate.
There are manifold reason to support this view.first and foremost I'd that people can easily communicate with there kithe and kind in any corner of the world. to justify, some people live separate from their family and lover and it is not possible to meet them so the telephone and internet is a lucrative way to communicate .to examplify, some relationship spoiled because of long distance between people so that's why internet and telephone are helpful for them.
However, ever garden have some weeds so it have also some disadvantages to spent more time on internet and mobile phones .it doesn't put bad impact on eye sight only but also it wasted precious time of people..moreover,people spent too much time on internet so the many relationship are ending before starting.
To sum-up, people use technology to communicate on a large scale which is good for stay in contact with other but they should avoid to massive use of cellphone and internet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 221.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01357466063 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05230368903 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570135746606 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6202992618 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.285714286 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.5714285714 20.7667163134 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389065633349 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166750637287 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980657886635 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22455079708 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120051387608 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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