Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
It is true that playing video games helps people to relax and reduce stress after a hard-working day. While this may have some good effects on users, I believe that overall, the drawbacks of computer games are more dramatic.
On the one hand, people, especially children, can enhance their mindset via video games. It is also considered to be an educational and entertaining tool that can be used as a measure of people's development. For example, League of Legends is a strategic computer game that requires five players as a team to build up ultimate plans in order to beat the opposite team through destroying the main tower. This kind of game teaches children to improve their logical thinking, decision making as well as concentration, which are useful skills for them to apply in reality.
On the other hand, abusing video games can cause some bad effects on health. When children spend too much time on gaming due to the addiction of rewards and prizes, they may pay less attention to their meals and fast foods are the most appropriate choice. This contributes to the increase of obesity which leads to heart diseases. Another harmful aspect is that mental health can result from people staring at the screen most of their times. Lack of social skills will make children deduce their EQ to connect with others and moreover, delusional minds can exist as a result of playing games uncontrollably.
In conclusion, I believe that the disadvantages of playing video games outweigh the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... EQ to connect with others and moreover, delusional minds can exist as a result o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94861660079 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65191176994 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624505928854 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6102540035 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.333333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34258667269 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127258725374 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973753421314 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243688981703 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733982677509 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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