Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
According to myself, playing games are indispensable thing in our life and especially for children. Some people said that playing game are not dangerous and can bring to us many benefits while other believe it have a negative impact on people. In this essay will present you the advantages and disadvantages of games. However, i agree the side believe that game can bring bad impact.
Firstly, those entertainment games can increase our analytical and creation skills. Example, spend time on creating game, make design or even manage your town. These processes motivate individual to use their own mind. As my opinion, you can learn lots of informations from playing games or even increase you knowledge. So, one of the greatest advantages is practising work with using imagination are fully included.
Secondly, alot of children focusing on playing, grinding, finish tasks or upgrade level through the games and spend hours each day trying to finish progress without doing homework and having lacking sleep, over-playing the games possibly lead to severe myopia. One of the worst behavior is many many gamer all over the world are toxic, they just keep saying bad word even a person help them. Based on these compelling evidence, it appears that video games have a big influence on children's lives not only school works and also their body health.
In conclusion, video games have many benefits such as improvement in learning ability and entertainment, the disadvantage of the games is really bad and can cause fatal mind to children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13492063492 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64731022903 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662698412698 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0845503958 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328176963542 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104234741198 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070420160619 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194921334927 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240972862962 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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