Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Nowadays some people face advertisement, which shows them the different things. Part of people claims that advertising imposes the needless things, but others think that it helps them to buy important products. As for me, advertisement lets people know about new interesting goods.
On one hand, a commercial gives people opportunity to be familiar with useful things. Everyday a lot of manufactures produces new subjects, which are improved by modern technologies, become better and make easy our life. An innovated subject is attract people, because it has a good quality to compare previous thing. Hence, the advertisement of these things pushes forward the improved goods. For example, nobody has known about the new generation vacuum cleaner, until the company iRobot revealed the existence of a robotic vacuum cleaner by showing people its ads.
On the other hand, there are a lot of ads about useless things, which promote people buy it. Sellers try to show people unusual properties of their products and people believe them. People want to get marvelous device, but after the purchase they aware that this thing is not useful. Sometimes people face propose such as buy one and get second as a gift. Whole extraordinary qualities and special offers were made up to attract people attention. So, advertisers make their job and sell goods. But people lose their money because of buying futile baubles. For instance, according to the magazine Live over 60 percent of buyers have acquired useless things due to advertisement during 2019.
In conclusion, I can say that sometimes ads are imposed to us with useless things, but some products needs an introduction to simplify our lives. In my point of view, people need advertisement to get to know goods and decide whether to buy these things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
...nity to be familiar with useful things. Everyday a lot of manufactures produces new subj...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, second, so, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13605442177 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68336952833 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615646258503 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8939213993 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8888888889 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302133524413 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896943084684 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476512793884 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190075578309 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339514940612 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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