Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that ad tell us about new products that may improve our lives. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, advertisements are important method for the companies to show individual their products. While some people argue that this ads make them buy more than they need, others say advertising is necessary because they can know about news goods which may improve their lives. Personally, I think people are spending more money due to advertisements.
On the one hand, businesses use advertisements to make more customers know about their goods and buy them. To begin with, some companies convince their buyers that their older products are out of date. So, they need to buy the lastest versions although the older one still work fluently. This method is usually used by technological companies such as Apple, Samsung, or Lenovo,etc. In addition, a number of people specially youngsters tend to be buy some products which they do not truly need. The simple reason is their idols who are brands ambassadors. Cosmetic companies and fashion companies usually hire celebrities in order to use their new merchandise and share them with their fans and these fan want to encourage their idols will buy products. This is the way companies earn profits.
On the other hand, thanks to advertisements people know about new merchandise. To commence with, advertising is the easiest method to introduce new products to the public. There is no doubt that, a variety of world changing products gain popularity due to advertisement. For example, the success story of electronic cigarette advertisements in the early 2005, which were believed to have saved millions from lung cancer. Moreover, Users have more options to chose what they want to buy so as to improve them in housework, skincare routine or any tasks they want to do. In Vietnam, for instance, the stoves which use electric become a trend when individual tend to used electronic stoves as the solution instead of gas or honeycomb charcoal stoves which often are main reason of fires or explosions.
In conclusion, people can improve their live when they see advertisements which introduce life-changing product. However, they also lost a mount of money because of advertisements which lead to unnecessary consumption of good life style. In my opinion, advertising brings more demerits than merits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: , etc
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... need. The simple reason is their idols who are brands ambassadors. Cosmetic companies ...
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Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... options to chose what they want to buy so as to improve them in housework, skincare rou...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tronic stoves as the solution instead of gas or honeycomb charcoal stoves which o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20936639118 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88978484026 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550964187328 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8439964136 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.55 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.15 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197216198534 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631991899959 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627473504188 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131727336043 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367281783822 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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