It is a debate whether advertising is effective in encouraging people to purchase products or if it is simply a tedious method of marketing that only attracts a few people. In my opinion, while advertising is a tool that businesses can use to make money, it is important for companies to focus on more than just advertising.
On one hand, some advertisements have been incredibly successful. The Nike slogan "Just do it" is recognized by people all around the world and has become a cultural phenomenon, inspiring people to push through challenges in life. This ad has brought Nike billions of dollars in profits and has helped the brand to develop more successful products.
On the other hand, not every company can achieve such success with advertising. Many businesses, such as restaurants, do not need to advertise heavily as consumers can simply read reviews on websites like Yelp to determine which establishment has the best food. In these cases, it is more important for companies to focus on their products or services rather than advertising.
Overall, while advertising can be an effective way to increase consumption, it is not always necessary for a business to rely heavily on it. With the rise of the internet and the current economic climate, consumers are becoming more informed and savvy, and may not be as easily swayed by advertisements as they once were.
- You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letterdescribe the problem with the equipmentexplain how this is affecting your worksay wha 78
- The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018 78
- You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work You phoned the shop but no action was taken Write a letter to the shop manager In your letter describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned t 78
- In recent years many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping Is this a positive or a negative development 89
- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise what can be done about this problem 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0652173913 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0122654118 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0750545851 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144991455583 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566021015934 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308642877562 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870567757651 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307584920531 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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