Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my concern with the action to close the sports and leisure center, which is totally unacceptable for my family and friends, particularly the children in our community.
Firstly I understand the consideration to save the public budget by our concil. While I contend that there will be more side effects than merit from the money saved. At least 30 children including my son and my friends' are in the red eagle team which competiting with the other 2 teams for the national champaign in the youth basketball league, they get trained and played matches in this center since they entered primary school. WIthout this place, they could not only chase their basketball dream but also fight for our community again.
Secondly, for most of the residence in our community, we would like to take our family to this center for fun at weekends, watching the red eagle's game, playing tennis or watch movies. This place is more than a center but a place for people to enjoy their times.
I kindly propose that we can alternate the policy that not close this center.
Yours Sincerely,
Tony
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o save the public budget by our concil. While I contend that there will be more side ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 951.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82741116751 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41829030754 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0279350869 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.666666667 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0748763894306 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366635488218 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428194789239 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496374576511 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506664741425 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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