Some people say that all young people should have full-time education until they are 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The idea that all students need to study full – time at schools until they are enough eighteen years olds is a major topic of concern. While I accept this idea due to its benefits, I strongly believe that schools should have flexible study timetable for students.
On the one hand, I contend that there are some merits that youngsters are recommended to study whole time at schools. The primary reason is that this policy will help the young to be equipped with fully fundamental knowledge as well as useful skills. With this knowledge, they are likely to become well-educated and skilled workforce, guaranteeing better standard of living in their future. Besides, when students are at schools all the times, they are controlled by the regulation of schools, and their parents therefore can feel secure about their children and highly focus on their work. These regulations also help youngsters to live to obey the laws, and become good citizens in the society.
However, I firmly believe that there are some significant benefits as students do not need to be at schools all times. This is because some school-aged children who are in high schools favour combining working and studying. Many American high school students, for example, have part – time jobs, and this enables them not only to earn money but also obtain real experience before graduating. Therefore, it is impossible for them to participate in working if this policy is implemented.
In conclusion, although supplying full-time schooling for students until they graduate from high schools can brings some aforementioned benefits, I am firmly of the opinion that the school’s timetables should be more flexible so that students can pursue their passion besides their studying.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16842105263 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70602533237 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5137573174 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196189699661 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745892349672 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046017633969 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126052888086 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309833831687 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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