Some people say that art (e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can be only made by those with special abilities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
From ancient times to this day, art has been an integral facet of human life. Concerning this area, people often polarised opinions about art production, whether it could be made by ordinary people or can only be completed by talented artists. This essay will throw some light on both notions of the concept and give a personal conclusion.
To commence with, there are various rationales for those who believe artwork can be made by everyone. It has emerged that a sense of beauty belongs to the intrinsic merits of human beings. We are born with this innate characteristic that enables us to feel, discover and depict different aspects of this beautiful world. Hence, painting, music, and poetry can come from our daily life. For instance, during the ancient period, Vietnamese peasants usually created folk songs when they were working on farms as a way to communicate with each other and relieve stress. Later, these folk songs become a treasure trove of this nation's artistic culture. We must admit that these amateur artists just need to put their souls into creation to have a piece of art without any special abilities. All they have is their passions and interests.
On the other hand, we cannot refuse that extraordinary artwork is often produced by talented people. These poets, musicians, singers, and painters may be superior in creativity as they have a noteworthy sense of art. They might be more sensitive than normal people in feeling every single aspect of this life and putting it into their creation. Furthermore, artists will have special ways to express their painting, music, or poetry that others hardly understand. They also apply technical modalities to upgrade their creation to a higher level. Some high achievers in the art world such as Van Gogh and Beethoven are robust evidence for this. They have their own path to pursue the truly artistic value even when they have to dedicate their whole life.
By and large, I reckon that both opinions have their reasons. Whoever they are, ordinary or talented people, they all have a sense of beauty and use their own way to express it. However, artists create artwork in a professional method. Eventually, it depends on their aims and visions to follow their artistic path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 618, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e folk songs become a treasure trove of this nations artistic culture. We must admit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, for instance, i reckon, such as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98143236074 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45492113371 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583554376658 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9358567697 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3636363636 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1363636364 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202169684643 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588511567843 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802736752004 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133489211744 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082781671106 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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