Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
People are becoming more and more conscious about their health nowadays. Some of them thought to make it possible by increasing the number of sports facilities while others think that it would just have a little impact on fitness and other factors are required to be considered. This essay will discuss why sports has its benefits in improving fitness, but why other measures are required to put under consideration which will have better effect on public well being.
Most of us believe that sports are the best way to improve health and rising the number of sports will help us to do so. We feel the physical strain while playing and due to releasing of sweat, the fat will be lessened in amount. Moreover, our muscles become stronger than before and we feel energetic too. The athletes are the best example for this. In short, Sports can improve our health.
However, few of us believe that there are a number of reasons behind improving the well being and sports only can help to achieve it to some extent but not fully. Healthy diet, regular exercise, meditation, positive attitude, mental stability, etc. are those factors which are also significantly important as sports. For example, Most of the sportsmen spend 2-3 hours daily in the gym in order to achieve fitness and follow a proper diet for being healthy. Hence, it is also necessary to focus on other factors also and not just in sports.
Fitness should not be taken for granted and we should be aware of that. This essay discussed why sports are necessary to be healthy, but why other measures are important as well. In my opinion, We should not be dependent only on sports, but we should also focus on other measures like diet and exercise etc. The combination of all these factors can help us to achieve our goal best.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in short, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73870967742 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32963980995 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512903225806 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3970213888 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307058542285 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980541019377 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900501456034 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18937231194 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10997359532 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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