It is a widely held view that, to develop better health of citizens is because of numerous sports opportunities, on the contrary, it is acclaimed by others that there would be less merits to follow such facilities instead to adapt several paramount strategies. According to my personal perspective, I support the latter statement due to core reasons along with their results.
Generally, when public is fascinated by various sports equipment and appliances then there seem to be curiosity and motivation among the individuals to join and experience such strenuous workout and specific plan. Furthermore, latest versions of swimming pool as well as interesting outdoor activities could mesmerised future narcissistic generation so that they can regularly maintain their weight. To cite an example, although obesity is not uncommon major issue which is resulting in anxiety, depression and cardiac ailments , sensible seniors are trying to improve their sedentary lifestyles in order to demonstrate positive well-being.Therefore, only such precautions should be only taken by intellectual members of our society rather than all of the nation.
Alternatively, there tend to be frequent paradox reasons that should be most probably considered to ameliorate such transformation. First of all, water and sanitation modification have to be implemented. Secondly, inflation leads to serious health consequences due to which many under developed countries are suffering day by day. Last but not least, unemployment and transportation are playing grave perplexity on on an international platform. To illustrate, poorer countries like Ethiopia and Sudan are drastically suffering together with such intense necessities and construction of gym might be an luxury to certain states. Consequently, alterations of fundamental requirements is highly recommended in these circumstances.
By way of conclusion,unless people have been dramatically conscious for their physical appearance through exercise, the problem of public health will escalate.But why not is this only pragmatic approach to decline this phenomenon? Literally, if we think for aforementioned planning there would be incredible innovation globally soon.
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letterdescribe the situatio 56
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.Discuss both these views and give yo 89
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student.However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work.Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letterdescribe the situatio 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 177, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun merits is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...acclaimed by others that there would be less merits to follow such facilities instea...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the latest'.
Suggestion: , the latest
...s workout and specific plan. Furthermore, latest versions of swimming pool as well as in...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'mesmerise'
Suggestion: mesmerise
...as interesting outdoor activities could mesmerised future narcissistic generation so that ...
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Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...anxiety, depression and cardiac ailments , sensible seniors are trying to improve ...
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Line 3, column 641, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...rder to demonstrate positive well-being.Therefore, only such precautions should be only t...
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Line 3, column 746, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...tual members of our society rather than all of the nation. Alternatively, there tend t...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'considered ameliorating'.
Suggestion: considered ameliorating
...ox reasons that should be most probably considered to ameliorate such transformation. First of all, wate...
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Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: on
...sportation are playing grave perplexity on on an international platform. To illustrat...
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Line 5, column 600, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...sities and construction of gym might be an luxury to certain states. Consequently,...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , unless
... circumstances. By way of conclusion,unless people have been dramatically conscious...
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Line 7, column 160, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
... problem of public health will escalate.But why not is this only pragmatic approach...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as well as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91900311526 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43782507643 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.697819314642 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6624125484 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.153846154 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119661867496 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358008677006 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467820057595 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757024875804 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045584539227 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.35 12.4159519038 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.83 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.