Leading a health life is important for all age groups. Having a healthy society is important for the country and economy. Government has taken lots of measures to ensure public fitness. Let us discuss the if opening more sports facilities will improve public health or not.
Importance should be given to maintain good health. Now a days, health care has become expensive and not everyone can afford good medical care. Doctors also recommend going to gym or indulge in sports activities to stay healthy. There are many ways to stay fit, walk regularly in parks, go to gym or play sports.It is established that playing sports will help one stay mentally and physically fit. Lots of efforts are taken by government as well to encourage people engage in sports. For example: We have famous sports personality taking stay fit challenge along with the Prime Minister of the nation to encourage and spread awareness among public about staying fit and healthy.
Currently there are very few sports facilities in societies and are expensive, not all can afford it. In order to make public involve in sports we have to open more sports facilities which are affordable or free of cost. Sports facilities should include games such as squash which is a good cardio exercise, jogging tracks, badminton, swimming etc,. to stay fit. On the other hand apart from sports facilities one could argue building more parks and open gym would be more beneficial, no doubt about it but not all like walking in park.
In conclusion i believe opening more sport facilities definitely will improve the public health. People should also use the sports facilities regularly in order gain more benefits. Government can provide the facility but at the end it is the public who have to use it and build general awareness of staying fit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94754098361 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48630973381 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0960566013 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9444444444 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177224413844 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617510678497 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509470706869 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124203530152 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346376169195 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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