Now a days stress and stress-related illness are quiet common among people. This essay will discuss two main causes for stress related illness including long working hours and peer pressure to finish job on time. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems including proper work life balance and dealing with peer pressure.
People are working for long hours than ever before job and the same time have to meet the high quality of work standards set by their peers. Jobs have to be finished within the tight deadlines as the workforce is a competitive domain.For example, some people want to finish the job on time by working overtime to get promotion and increased salary. While some people work overtime to compete with the peers so that can be noticed by their seniors and can climb up the corporate ladder fast. This results in mental and physical suffering due to long working hours and corporate pressure which ca be stressful.
Maintaining good work life balance and dealing with mental pressure by regular exercise and meditation will be critical to mitigate work related stress. People need to realize that by working overtime they are burning out mentally and physically, which will only aggregate the issue further. For example, many people do not have enough time to sleep due to over work, neglect their family and friends, have no social life, no time to exercise and meditate to stay mentally and physically fit. Therefore, good sleep, maintaining good lifestyle, diet, exercise and meditation will help combat work related stress.
In conclusion, in today’s fast paced world more people are facing stress related illness. This essay discussed how long working hours and peer pressure could cause stress. This essay also suggested solutions to deal with work related stress by managing work life balance and regular exercise.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12131147541 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39600212395 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524590163934 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7320690672 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.571428571 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145711691442 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694766996455 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057630522695 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116897761947 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740725373921 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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