Nowadays, a healthy lifestyle will make a huge role in humans life. Some people believe that the increasing number of sports activities is the best approach to improve public health while others think that this is not enough to affect health in a positive way. This essay will discuss both sides in detail and provide evidence as to why the increasing number of sports activities is not the best method for better health.
If there are plenty of sports provisions are available for people, it will be beneficial for their physical fitness. Moreover, there are lots of advantages for children to have sports facilities. For example, in recent years, in India, a number of people who are participating in sports games such as Cricket, Football, Tennis and Running so they work hard for getting a fit body. However, in these types of persons, there are fewer chances to get any diseases because of their strong immunity. In short, because of improving physical fitness for people sports facilities are important.
Although sports facilities are crucial for public health, control on diet also makes a big difference for health. In addition, healthy food is extremely important for children and adults to overcome several diseases. For instance, some people are doing a workout at the gym but they do not have a proper diet so without control over fast food, physical exercise will be not affected efficiently. Furthermore, most chubby young adults have a habit of eating junk food like Pizza, Burger and French Fries at the restaurant. Overall, following a particular diet is increasingly helpful for health.
It is increasingly likely that other factors are also crucial for better health apart from sports facilities. However, there has been required to improve the amenities of sports. Ultimately, there are a lot of methods for public health which leads to positive aspects in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...hat this is not enough to affect health in a positive way. This essay will discuss both sides in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, apart from, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10610932476 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62536599413 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.834766144 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4375 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273709767611 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976442049122 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100002055673 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191989657531 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100701672212 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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