These days, many people usually get sick without any difficulties because of various aspects. Some people claim that the most effective way of decreasing this problem is to increase the sports area, while there are others who think that it does not make sense and does not have the right impact. It seems to me that this is not an impactful method to improve the health state of the general public, and I am completely against the statement. This essay will discuss both views and summarise the main points in the end.
On the one hand, those who agree with this opinion provide a variety of reasons to support their viewpoint. For instance, in small cities, there is a lack of places for sports activities. Additionally, they are certain that rising sports fields encourage people to start to do sports. Moreover, many homeowners do not have free space for physical activities in their houses. Sports areas outdoors allow them to improve health by sport.
On the other hand, those who disagree with the above idea have their own points, too. For example, they assert that the health status of everyone does not depend on sport only. According to the last survey, many individuals remain healthy by keeping the right diet because wrong food consumption may cause a huge problem in the human body and remove all benefits of doing sports.
In conclusion, people's well-being could be worsened by our habits, however, building more sports facilities could not affect much in our society. I believe there is no evidence to support this statement. In addition, I think the wellness of people could be preserved by other productive ways except for increasing sports areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...reasing this problem is to increase the sports area, while there are others who think ...
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Line 1, column 384, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...thod to improve the health state of the general public, and I am completely against the statem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, except for, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91843971631 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44080103298 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609929078014 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7795487515 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258980366009 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778809577291 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575072643784 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144989354517 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790594957222 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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