Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Improving public health is, I firmly believe, an essential part of every modern society, either in developed countries or developing ones. The question, however, is whether increasing the number of sport facilities can boost public health or there are more important factors which can influence on public health. Despite popular belief, I am, to a huge extent, an advocate of the latter approach.
Granted, sport classes, from the financial view point, need a huge amount of money that you should pay every month if you want to be as a membership. Thus, a huge amount of people due to financial issues prefer to save their money rather than register for gym. If governments increase a number of facilities and devices for fellows in public places such as park, absolutely give them great opportunity to do some exercises, put an end on sedentary life style and descend the number of diseases which are widespread among people like heart strokes, diabetes and obesity.
On the other hand, by contrast, we should be aware about the other factors that are directly and negatively affect our health quality. First and foremost, air pollution is a detrimental issue and all people suffer from it. Hence, government can allocated some budget to improve the public transportation in order to encourage people to give up using private car and decrease amount of air pollution which triggers a variety of breathing disorders. Furthermore, some part of the budget should dedicate to advertisement which offer people a healthy life style and eating habits. By this advance not only can people ban themselves about junk food but also it can give them great and productive advice about their diet and ingredient which is more beneficial for them.
All things considered, overall, although sports facilities bring a number of blessings, I wholeheartedly contend that another measures are required to boost public health, particularly in terms of public transportation and advertisement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, thus, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20062695925 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8140763943 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598746081505 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7505991257 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253635930172 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853743983271 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695166540749 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158282997013 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404817975746 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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