Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Information that we have, I firmly believe, play an essential role in every individual's life, either for young people or for aging ones. The question is, however, whether some group of people assert that sharing information can be beneficial in various fields or others contend that some information are costly to share it freely. Despite popular belief, I am, to a huge extent, an advocate of the latter approach.
Granted, information, from practical viewpoint, can vitally be efficient and revolutionize condition of a company or even a country. As an illustration, we can point to some intelligence and novel information that some people have in various era, therefore if we put all of these data together as a part of the puzzle, admittedly, we can reach prospers quickly in a myriad of positions such as industry, science research, art and so on. Since some useful data are unusable but, when we put all of them together can get the better result rather than solely.
On the other hand, in contrast, people who accumulate these information dedicate a bulk of time and currency to find it. Hence, it is not logical and firm to their effort and energy without any benefit. Further and most importantly, the most exquisite point which come through my mind at the first glance is related to the world that we live in it, there is a close competition in order to acquire suitable and appropriate occupation which provide sufficient currency, thus, the most important factor that directly and positively distinguish us from others is our knowledge. So, why should you share your data freely between others?
All things considered, although sharing information can bring a number of merits, I wholeheartedly reaffirm that the drawbacks of sharing information freely outweigh and outnumber its blessings, particularly in terms of energy consumption and career opportunity.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...elieve, play an essential role in every individuals life, either for young people or for ag...
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Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...and, in contrast, people who accumulate these information dedicate a bulk of time and currency to...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that directly and positively distinguish us from others is our knowledge. So, why...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12418300654 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92199993892 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.9690246189 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.545454545 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241116159394 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850239144257 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0883412522232 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14438335733 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520457792078 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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