Increasing the quantity of sports facilities, is widely believed, is the finest way to improve public health, while there is an oppose idea that suitable measures are more important. From my perspective, I really support both views.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people prefer sports facilities. Obviously, people come to these places for modern sports devices and right guidance. Sports devices play an important role in enhancing the quality of excercises and providing a number of distinct excercises for different purposes denpending on customers. In other words, without necessary devices, a limitation in trainning is inevitable, therefore people cannot develop or improve health at their best. Right guidance is also an integral part of trainning. In fact, trainees with suitable guidance are more likely to purchase success, a healthy body, faster than others because they are on the right track. However, fees from sports facilities are certainly unavoidable, some places require membership. This, could be considered, is too luxurious and only available for the elite.
On the other hand, there are no rooms for doubt that measures are absolutely crucial when improving public health. It is true that not everyone has the same strength, some have lots of spare time for excercises but some do not. That is why appropriate measures are necessary. For example, businessman, who have to travel a lot, cannot go to the gym or yoga class frequently, they need to have their own excercises to practice in their leisure time. Besides, diet and stringent schedule are also required. Following strict diet and schedule is not easy, but it will lead to fruitful achievement, a healthy life. Therefore, who have high determination will succeed.
In conclusion, both sports facilities and suitable measures are needed to build up a healthy community.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 78
- Some people say that online learning is the most effective and convenient way to learn.Others say that online learning will never be as effective as learning at real school, in person.Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 84
- Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 56
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- International travelers can cause problems to the countries to which they travel On the other hand international travelers can bring real advantages with them Are the problem international travelers cause greater than the advantages they bring 59
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 126, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...o improve public health, while there is an oppose idea that suitable measures are more im...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3164983165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79812363137 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0759725704 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7222222222 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257045537152 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675720618714 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611414260564 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147555003867 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478941495334 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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