Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some argue that building more sports facilities is the ideal way to promote a healthy lifestyle. However, others believe that this will have a limited impact and other alternatives are far more practical. While constructing more sports buildings makes them more accessible to locals, this will put a huge strain on government’s budget. I believe that other measures, such as spreading awareness and education amongst people is a viable solution.
On the one hand, it is believed by some that building more sports centers in a certain community, relatively, means more accessibility to these places. Bringing these amenities closer to local community members will encourage them frequent these facilities more often than when they are far. For instance, the number of sport centers and stadiums in Qatar has more than doubled over the last decade and this has contributed to increasing the number of people who go in for sports regularly. However, this may not be practical recourse for many nations due to cost factor.
On the other flip, it is argued that education is the key to promote welfare and public health. When people are aware of the implications they may encounter in the long run due to being overweight, they are more likely to change their attitudes and do even simple physical exercises regularly to stay fit. Not only is it beneficial to them physically, but also psychologically because doing physical activity is recreational. For example, a study that was conducted by Yale University in Singapore showed that people’s awareness is the key behind their welfare and higher life expectancy. I agree with this approach because it is more convenient and cost effective.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that constructing more sports centers is not affordable to all nations. However, spreading education and consciousness is the ideal way to change people's behavior as it addresses the root cause of the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22364217252 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94029015036 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552715654952 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6082317072 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.0 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171470433481 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612084701729 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452963505159 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102679723324 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262399545929 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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