Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits.
Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
It is argued that being a renowned movie star or a singer brings about drawbacks and advantages to this category of people. This essay, however, believes that despite the fact that famous people are constantly harassed by the press and being disturbed on the streets by ordinary people, the benefits of leading a lavish life and enjoying a good reputation far outweigh the disadvantages.
The primary reason why fame bring about more benefits to celebrity is the fact that they are role models to many people. This can be seen when they are being disturbed on the streets by admirers who hold them in high esteem and imitate in all aspects of life. In spite of being all the time under media pressure, such as being subject to consistent denigration and gossip dissemination, they are less likely to be affected by this as the majority of their followers see them as paragons. For example, C. Ronaldo has more than 6 million followers from around the planet on his Facebook page, which makes him enviable person.
As well as that, the substantial amount of money this people yield from being famous enables them to spend recklessly and lead a prodigal lifestyle. Becoming a rich person is one of the major factors that makes people happy. Therefore, wealth put these celebrities a step forward to be one of the most fortunate people on earth. This will also positively affect their family members and relatives who would benefit from this fortune, such as their children who would have a better future prospect. For example, The Guardian newspaper reported that the famous boxer Mayweather earn more than 5 million dollars per each boxing match and this has made him one of the richest sports players in the world.
In conclusion, I believe that being a renowned people brings more joy, welfare and prosperity despite being subject to press harassment and fake news propagation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in spite of, as well as that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93730407524 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53098253329 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579937304075 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0763034951 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.153846154 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279744588547 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946380571624 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561328227059 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175621733734 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360551900187 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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