The physical well being concerns every individual in society. As measures to improve public health, some people believe the best approach is to provide sufficient sports facilities; nonetheless, other deem this approach has limited effect and keeping a diet is essential. These two views will be discussed before a final conclution.
To start with, to increase the quantity of sports facilities significantly facilitates the improvement of public health. With more parks and stadiums built, more people will be attacted to participate in sports; therefore, the standard of public health increases. Take Australia and China for comparison, Australians own more parks than Chineses. Consequently, Australians are generally healthier than Chineses. To increase the number of parks benefites the fitness of individual. However, other factors also influence public health.
Keeping a diet also promotes public health. Modern citizens suffer from obesity due to the abundant supply of food; nevertheless, to keep a balanced diet eschews this modern problems. People live on the coast of the medditeriain sea have a eating habit of prominantly fish and fruit. These people build an athletic body and seldom suffer from obesity because of the balanced diet. Thus, keeping a balanced diet is essential to maintain and improve public health.
To recapitulate, public health is an issue concerning every individual. To praticipate in sport substantially improves pbulic; while to keep s healthy diet is also crucial to the maintaining and improving of public heatlh. With more people actively partake of sprots and stick to balanced diet, the level of public health will ascend to a higher standard.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 240, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the coast of the medditeriain sea have a eating habit of prominantly fish and fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, well, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54615384615 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89889797465 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0939265464 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8235294118 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.29411764706 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329523256763 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108318371956 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856922928532 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205920983357 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503587312583 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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