In addition to gender difference, male and female are generally divergent in physical strength, verbal articulation and personality. Therefore, some people believe men suit for some specific occupation while women are not, vice versa. Personally, I agree with this opinion.
Men are physically stronger than women, that enable them exclusively appropriate for certain job, such as fireman. The work of fireman requires robust body to withstand the extreme condition of a fire scene. However, women are physically vulnerable and not suitable for this sort of occupation. For instance, to entrence the high pressure fire hose, the fire fighter must be strong and sturdy. Women never attain these attributes.
By contrast, women articulate themselves better than men due to the genetic reason, which suffice them for the job of teller. Tellers must articulate clearly in order to transit the accurate information, which is the occupation female are good at. However, male are terrible at express and listen. For example, a female teller can easily convey the newest benefit of credit card to clients; whereas, male cannot articulate themselves.
To recapitulate, the general differences between man and woman influence the occupations they suit for. Male are physically robust, which enable them to work in harsh environment. Whereas, female are better at verbal explaination than male, which makes them good tellers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, therefore, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in addition, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 218.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53211009174 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80103627703 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.997204175 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5333333333 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233463550074 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783956934939 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901384242347 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141577685576 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793977710347 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.2 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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