Some people say that the best way to improve road safety would be to increase minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is assumed that raising the minimum legal age for riding vehicles is the best approach to ensure the road safety. Although I believe that this measure will have some positive impacts to some extent, it is far from being the best one.
To begin with, increasing the minimum driving legal age would lessen the likelihood of getting into collisions with commuters. This is because an increasing number of traffic accidents are induced by reckless driving of young adults as a result of peer pressure which makes them willing to boast their driving skills and daring. Therefore, by raising the permitted driving age, the government can join hands with parents and schools to refrain these careless drivers from controlling the wheels and posing threats to other travelers. However, this would only act as a deterrent to only one culprit of a whole host of road crashes, thus, there are more plausible methods to tackle this.
The government should introduce more stringent penalties on traffic violations such as longer imprisonment or higher fines which could play a role as a warning to potential offenders. To illustrate, if these people foresee the consequences of their actions, they will be more responsible while riding. Admittedly that some of them, especially those from the rural areas, may not be fully aware of the driving rules or the new punishment systems. However, the public sector can step up campaigns to raise public awareness about road safety and the end results of not abiding by the laws.
In conclusion, I agree that increasing the minimum driving age can limit the accidents caused by teenagers. Nevertheless, people should consider other measures such as imposing stricter laws and punishment that can prevent not only the youth but also careless drivers from the road.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10508474576 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59020762185 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8289971756 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256956200275 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922578631392 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650800620907 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157747816347 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570796906103 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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