some people say that the best way to improve safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or riding motorbikes. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
In this contemporary era, the number of accidents on the road is increasing on daily basis. Few citizens believe that the reasonable path for improved safety is to raise the minimum legal age for driving vehicles, while others do not support that statement. This essay will explain why people think to increase the legal age for driving, and also give reasons for my disagreement, which described in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are various situations happen, which indicate that the legal age should be change. To begin with, The main factor behind the accident is immaturity and less decision-making ability, and if the government increase the legal age for riding, then the drivers become more mature, which will help to reduce accident on the road. For example, since the UK change the legal age from 18 to 20 years, the rate of accidents decline, which written in a survey of the University of London.
On the other hand, there are plenty of other methods, which is more accurate for road safety. Firstly, The propagation of traffic is reduced by providing free transportation. That will improve your safety. Secondly, if the authority makes roads wide, then the chance of Accidents will decrease. For instance, The USA have a wider road, therefore the rate of accidents was lower as compared to other nations.
To conclude, although legal age is vital for road safety, free public transport and wider roads are more useful for the safety on the road.
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Message: Did you mean 'changed'?
Suggestion: changed
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61772752565 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568548387097 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2127059887 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202547716074 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770443145445 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711361502889 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134827234296 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079555354323 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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