Some people say that E-books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazine to.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Technology has been upgrading today's generation by knowing the facts happening globally but a conventional proportional of individuals have a thought that traditional ways of news will disappear soon. The upcoming paragraph will scrutinize this viewpoint before giving any personal opinion.
On the one side of coin, traditional newspaper and magazine cannot be replaced by e-books and modern technology. Newspaper has become a habit of adults as they are willingly waiting for the newspaper to read it with a cup of tea in the morning whereas, these ways are cheaper and easy to carry from one place to another. These have more popularity than the electronic books among society. Moreover, these have a effective way on people to remember the news for a longer period of time. Therefore, traditional components of news cannot be replaced by technology.
On the contrary, E-books as compared Ely to traditional one's provide a wide range of news from any corner of the world but, on the same side, these are difficult to carry from one place to other as the gadgets need seperate bag to handle and need more protectiveness to prevent it from damage. Eventhough, these technological gadgets consume a large proportion of money. Hence, mostly, people prefer to a manual method of news rather than the computerized one. That's why, people give priority to traditional methods.
In conclusion, I disagree with this thought that E-books and technology will be more famous than traditional newspaper as electronic books are more expensive and problematic to carry than the others while, newspaper and magazines have much popularity among adults and elders.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-11-30 | Jaswinder lal | 67 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 274, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...oks among society. Moreover, these have a effective way on people to remember the...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eople to remember the news for a longer period of time. Therefore, traditional components of n...
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Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... news rather than the computerized one. Thats why, people give priority to traditiona...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23308270677 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89840603314 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541353383459 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7999931243 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228790811363 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881986998752 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703363247997 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143406126237 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560735226627 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.