Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce the poverty in the world.Other say that economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Economy is the fundamental necessity of any country in the world. It is often argued that economic development plays an imperative role to alleviate the number of underprivileged people, while other parts of the society believe that economic growth ought to terminate quickly.
The essay will discuss both perspectives in brief.
On the one hand, it is really Paramount to survive in the world. Moreover, Economy is country's currency will get stronger. For example, The development in industry can result in increasing in export as a result the Government obtain more for the citizens who are unaware of such facilities.Furthermore,it makes army and defense system more enhanced consequently, they can save their community during the war.Hence, it is vital to be powerful economically.
On the other hand, people argue that it should be stopped to save nature one possibility is that the government should restrict some practices to reduce the contamination of surroundings by putting appropriate regulations and distinct standards. For instance, in some European countries there is better air and greenery. Although, their economy is strong. Secondly, industrial areas should be far from residential areas. Factories can take an initiative like tree plantation and it will create a balance.
In my opinion, economics is a basic requirement for all, every nation is trying to become Stronger by this faux chance to live prosperous lives along with a healthy life.
On the whole there is no option to cause economic advancement. It is crucial for our life however there must be some regulations in order to protect the environment.
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...tries there is better air and greenery. Although, their economy is strong. Secondly, ind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in brief, as a result, in my opinion, on the whole, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28085106383 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97864437585 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629787234043 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9802432335 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.416666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220290911994 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588467009854 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605799468783 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102606012491 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541241775904 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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