Some students take one year off between finishing high school and going to university, in order to travel or to work.
Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Today's generation is really advanced in contrast of earlier. Nowadays, youngsters want to obtain numerous achievements from literally a small age. Undoubtedly, students want to have fun at the same time while learning. However, there are a variety of disadvantages than positive points.
To begin with, vocation it can be done while studying lots of youngsters manages to work along with their study in respective fields. Not only that but also, Universities are giving plethora of golden opportunities to do part-time job together with study time. Moreover, it is noticeable that colleges have a partnership with other job relative companies in order to provide job to students who want to grow more or facing financial problem. For Instance, a student who decides to take a break from learning then it certainly affect in future due to not having regular practice in study. As a result, this might
lead to difficulties in study when they join university certain types of theories learnt from school might forgot so the basic becomes very weak. That is why it is advisable to keep mind busy in regular routine neverthless, it may feel tedious after little time back. Hence, no school or university give vacation for over six months.
Furthermore, youngsters can do their pursuit from online over the internet. In modern world major works are compleating with the help of laptop or computer from home and even from smartphones so, multitasking is also an option for those who feels offline physical work much difficult or the commuting is an issue. To explain further, in a survey from university of oxford study shows that more than 70 percentages of students are doing an online job over traditional one.
Finally, for those who want to explore the world before getting elder they are making biggest mistake to ruin a very important year of their life just for travelling 365 days, from my point of view, an option of planning variety of trips to different places is already available altogether completing the degree. conventional work can be easily resumed and enjoying with colleagues is possible. Consequently, a year can be saved not only that but also it gives a serene feeling. Another point is that it can change the whole mood, mind and prevent stress.
In conclusion, it is not advisable to spoil a year for travelling purpose only as well as for work also because there are numerous options are available and several reasons to not to waste a year of a life when the priority is to study further just not to work only.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, then, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2145.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 429.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70847224635 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.359903805 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.894736842 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5789473684 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5789473684 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.38176352705 434% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142773388033 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413403500666 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305238623793 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0413765366354 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328818360676 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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