Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative. What is your opinion?
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- Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative What is your opinion 56
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- Some people say that feeling of competition should be encouraged in children others say they should be taught to become cooperative What is your opinion 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Youryesters a assert be colossal aw supposed t nation...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Youryesters a assert be colossal aw supposed t nation. Prese...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tion. Presently, a that egged up out of a in box feeling of offspring. This sense...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'explicate'
Suggestion: explicate
...accommodative should be infused in will explicates both the aspects along my perception in...
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...t appernity by working wound the clock. a consequence, sence of Competition seems...
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...onfront this Scenario in their life. able Numerous points the later Could be b...
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Suggestion: By
...cummulate bucket of ideas and thoughts. by exchanging with each other. Tonsequentl...
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...s among competition gever mon children. to hole of birth to Jealousy and d Mivalay...
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Suggestion: Consequently,
...d Mivalay encounter their counterparts. Consequently collaberation is a fruitful idea fit fu...
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Suggestion: Mix
...n to cooperation + beth the terms have. mix bang cons. Undeniably competitive ess h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stimulated to co-ordinate among peers in order to make holistic development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, well, while, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 41.998997996 179% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2237.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37740384615 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09475537273 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.5781559332 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.48 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.64 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330831694484 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699757160536 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650817356655 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209067699359 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321349718583 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 134.0 78.4519038076 171% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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