some people say that government must apply high taxes to provide good public services for everyone.Give your opinion?
Whether to pay high taxes is one of the disputable issue for the last couple of years.Presently,a proportion of people believe that paying high tax is more beneficial to improve the standard of living condition of a nation.This essay will argue the view and with my own perception towards the tax payment.
To begin with,the development of public services are depend on the revenue of government and tax is one of the main sources of the revenue of the government.The more taxes that people pay,the more that these services improve.To justify,the countries like Singapore and Australia people pay huge amount of tax, so there infrastructure is well maintained and developed as compared to other countries who pay less tax rate. Therefore,in my opinion for the overall development of a country high taxation is necessary and people should obliged to pay it.
However,people always think that high taxation make them to pay their hard earned money to government forcefully.It is a fact that the more money people saved the more tax will be paid as compared to their counterparts who get minimum amount of salary.Thus make them to lose their motivation to work hard. For example,British citizens who paid well from their employers should pay large amount of money to their government in the name of tax. In short,if the taxes are too high it has some negative impacts on the society..
In conclusion,this essay argued that the high taxes have some benefits to the public services,though some high earned people have some negative perception about it.Therefore,in my opinion it will be better if the government should apply the right amount of taxes according to the earning of individuals. This really help to improve the public services of a country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0830449827 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04834275136 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487889273356 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.91806769 49.4020404114 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 183.625 106.682146367 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.125 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 7.06120827912 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301043648413 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144291341378 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547510240257 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197870744816 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623295851305 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.