Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the importance of learning History has contributed a great deal of heated debate. While some people believe that this subject is the most important, in my point of view, science and technology are more crucial.
The support of studying History come from the purpose of leaning history is to understand the presente from the past. First, it is important to understand the country's culture by learning history, because the history show the development of a country. As a result, through history people can understand the behavior of a country. Moreover, well understanding of history always leads people to do right things. In fact, history often repeated, so there are many lesson in the past, people can review and have suitable activities.
On the other hand, learning Science and Technology are very important. In fact, these subjects are very applicable and can be introduced into producing. Moreover, by understand technology, people can be able to know how a system work, then capable to use it. Furthermore, with a base of science and technology, people can develop new technology and upgrade the products.
In conclusion, both history and science and technology are important, however science and technology is more important.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: many lessons
...t, history often repeated, so there are many lesson in the past, people can review and have...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'lessons'?
Suggestion: lessons
...story often repeated, so there are many lesson in the past, people can review and have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, then, well, while, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 199.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30653266332 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87416100713 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 176.041082164 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557788944724 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.9463600657 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278389575084 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105357625199 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601714592895 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182951677727 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560014821694 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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