At the present time, sports help in binding different countries, ignoring the disputes and building friendship. It is believed by some people that international sports meet promote peace, brotherhood. I completely agree that having these events celebrated curb terrorism and enhance harmony.
To start with, the biggest global event is Olympics where several games are conducted and people from all the countries gather to watch and enjoy, thus sharing the pleasure together. Next, the national anthem played at the beginning of the sport is seen as a sign of patriotism, both the players and spectators get emotionally involved in the feeling of pride for one's own country. Besides this, intercontinental sports also acts as an ice-breaker among politicians of war ravaging countries to talk in a more sophisticated manner. This helps to spread the message of oneness and unity in diversity.we cannot refute the fact that it gives immense joy when the spirit of the game overcomes the petty barriers of countries and cultures because national teams often have players from different ethnicity and backgrounds.
Secondly, Common wealth games, ICC world cup, Twenty 20, and FIFA are widely organised and participated by more than 200 countries. We can see that, after the cricket match players congratulating and cheering up each other for their success and hard work. For example: Neighboring countries, India and Pakistan are on good pace in terms of sports and the cricketers of 2 countries are good friends outside the cricket ground. It also strengthens the relationship among countries, as the spirit and virtue of the player is seen and not the enmity with that country.
To reiterate, International sports events guide the nations in the direction of peace, harmony, brotherhood promoting non-violence and to believe in Unity is Strength. So, in my opinion sports bring world peace.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in my opinion, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35123966942 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94450701755 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.677685950413 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6555975225 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.916666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236617276478 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0841245416809 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893860755465 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154221170143 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111129620447 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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