Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes while others think one can't be judged on the basis of one's clothes. Discuss both the views and give your opinion
Dressing pattern has persistently been a subject of dispute among individuals and some people think someone’s appearances could mirror his culture and inner thoughts. Although preferred attire is sometimes considered an indication of cultural background, I think it is almost impossible to guess a person’s nature from his way of dressing and I discuss this subject in the following paragraphs.
Before the Industrial Revolution, people from divergent countries could barely communicate with each other and every society had its ownclothing style. Since then, there are still countless men and womenwho put on their efforts to keep their traditions alive and they follow the same dress code as their ancestors whichmakes distinguishing their enthics relatively easy. Traditional customs usually come in a variety of shapes and colors depending on numerous factors such as weathering conditions and the religious background of the society in the past. For example, the dress code varies regionally in my country, and while Arab people who settle down in southern parts with hot weather mostly wear light white aba, Kurdish people who inhabit mountainous areas use woolen fabricated for clothes.
However, I believe the way of dressing could not reflect the personality for several reasons. Firstly, they may be various restriction and laws in different parts of the world which limits the freedom of expression for individuals. For instance, in my country, Iran, women have to obey Islamic rules for clothing and even if someone is an atheist, she should wear Hijab in public. Secondly, in the work environment, employees with dissimilar clothing preferences are obliged to consider a high level of formality and they should dress professionally. Finally, thanks to developments in communication and transportation technology, in this such a globalized world companies can export their products internationally. So, it is not surprising if a youngster in the Middle East wears the same Nike shoes as a Hollywood superstar.
To sum up, I think while outward appearance could initiate initial judgment about a person’s background, it is not always a trustworthy factor.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49404761905 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07515808085 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1087630903 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154105747029 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477722666984 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303006491318 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908933052561 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186149081781 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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