Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say there are more important problems.
Some people reveal that biodiversity loss becomes a major issue, as we know these loss in variety of life leads to breakdown in the functioning of the ecosystem where decline has happened. Some say this is not a crucial topic to discuss and there are many things we should focus on.
On the other hand, those who had ideas that the extinction of animals and plants due to climate change have strong motives to hold that option. A common argument is plenty of causes of green botany and animals have eliminated this occurs due to human negligence towards the environment which destroyed existing natural habitat such as a lots of open fields have been demolished replacing for human habitation and construction of large buildings, where species lost their habitat. Another point to consider, clearing trees for forest in massive amounts will result in temperature changes in the surrounding environment, it is undeniable that others disasters will arise, one of which is flooding in the tropical country. This can be a nightmare for some groups about the fact that in the future our generation will not be able to see and learn about the diversity of species and animals that exist in this universe.
On the flip side of the coin, there are always some people that disagree. These people believe that there are more crucial problems that must be prioritized in their countries. In Asian countries, where they pay less attention to the development environment because they prefer to focus on education and business. Where human resources can compete with other countries in the international world, so they attract investors to plant stock so they can expand in several sectors.
I believe that the importance of protecting the environment is a major factor in providing balance to humans, plants and animals. if the earth is damaged and has no more comfort to live on, then these other things will not go well.
- Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy a thing Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention 61
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying 68
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people why might this be the case Do you think it is a positive or negative situation 84
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people why might this be the case 84
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this loss' or 'these losses'?
Suggestion: this loss; these losses
... loss becomes a major issue, as we know these loss in variety of life leads to breakdown i...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...troyed existing natural habitat such as a lots of open fields have been demolished rep...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... balance to humans, plants and animals. if the earth is damaged and has no more co...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96583850932 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62398102448 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4076917357 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.25 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8333333333 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228048901584 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720233182077 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377812456366 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113984663571 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170588890019 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.