Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Green issues have always been a great concern to our mankind. Many people believe that some problems are more serious than others, thus requiring more attention and action. This also has stroke a storm of controversy whether the extinction of some species of animals and plants are the most significant or there are more demanding things related to the environment.
On the one hand, It is undisputable that there are many types of pollution that we have been suffering from for recent years. An outrageous number given by many researchers in UK shows that 8,9 million people are killed a year from public due to the pollution. Everyday, we have to bear the polluted air, contaminated water,etc. They gradually do harm to our heath, and need so many effort to restore our environment back to its origin. Furthermore, Many aspects of our lives have also been reversed. For example, Global warming is the phenomena causing so many devastating consequences on our lives. Climate change is one of the outstanding cases. In 2016, In Vietnam,a long-lasting drought have put people to so many troubles. People lack water for their basic need, let alone water to supply many other activities like argriculture. Our life and environment has been heavily destroyed,
On the other hand, The disappearance of some species should be considered as the most dangerous one because it is the main reason for other kind of pollution. We all know that the health of ecosystem is maintained by its plant and animals. When an animal or plant is on the verge of extinction, it is the sign of ecosystem imbalance. Moreover, It is also a reminder that this imbalance has diminished the biodiversity and complexity - The loss of one species often triggers the loss of the other. For examples, when the grey wolves were in danger of dying out in YellowStone National Park, the population of beaver also decreased significantly. This is because elk, without the wolf as its predator, grazed more heavily by heavers for winter survival. Moreover, a well-balanced ecosystem purifies the environment, giving us the fresh life. The extinction of some species can have so much meaning in the environment. It represents that we are in great danger of disappearing as those species
" Prevention is better than cure." I believe that we should protect the endangered species because it is a way to help us protect our world/
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 56
- Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'stroked'.
Suggestion: stroked
...ore attention and action. This also has stroke a storm of controversy whether the exti...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: Every day
... year from public due to the pollution. Everyday, we have to bear the polluted air, cont...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
...ear the polluted air, contaminated water,etc. They gradually do harm to our heath, a...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun effort seems to be countable; consider using: 'many efforts'.
Suggestion: many efforts
...ually do harm to our heath, and need so many effort to restore our environment back to its ...
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Suggestion: , a
...e outstanding cases. In 2016, In Vietnam,a long-lasting drought have put people to...
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Suggestion:
...without the wolf as its predator, grazed more heavily by heavers for winter survi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99501246883 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88262952551 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531172069825 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6320816445 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.380952381 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0952380952 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.19047619048 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190223068504 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054222083756 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474404849898 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116036752979 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680872934967 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.