There is an argument about which environmental problem is the most important. While some people opine that losing certain animals and plants species is the most significant, others believe that other environmental issues are more crucial. I completely agree with both views and will explain the reasons.
On the one side, the biodiversity loss has caused the ecosystem to be unbalanced. Because of the unbalanced ecosystem, the environment we are living is not healthy anymore. For example, the disappearance of tigers in some areas have caused the massive increase of rabbits. Consequently, the number of green plants available are decreased because of the large number of rabbits who ate them. This is because in a normal food chain, tigers are supposed to eat rabbits, and rabbits are supposed to eat green plants, which make the environment balanced.
On the other side, there is also a lot of environmental issues which are also important, such as global warming and air pollution. Global warming, a condition where earth's surface is heated gradually, has caused extreme climate change in the world. As a result, summer becomes hotter than usual summers, and winter becomes colder than regular winters. Next, air pollution is also one of the most important environmental issues where the air that people breathe is already contaminated with high level of pollutants. Consequently, the number of people who experience respiratory diseases have increased and the number of people who died from them were also increased.
In conclusion, I completely agree that both biodiversity loss and other environmental issues such as global warming and air pollution are equally important because biodiversity loss has caused the ecosystem to be unbalanced, while global warming and air pollution have caused extreme climate change in the world and dangerous respiratory diseases, respectively.
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- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now and plans for its development Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
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- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Disucss both thes 56
- The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals for three types of nutrients all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42372881356 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92720451721 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498305084746 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.5141829705 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176633743964 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594594579383 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675107108012 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123787986942 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991999381309 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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