Nowadays, environmental problem becomes main concern for the people. Some people belive that, loss of particular species of flora and fauna is a main environmental concern; however, other believe that, there are other more significant factors that harm our environment. Both the views would be taken into consideration before a reasoned conclusion is drawn.
To commence with, although there are numerous factors which affect the environment, the main environmental problem of current time is due to loss of some plants and animals. If some species of animals become endangered, than it may affect on ecosystem totally distrube, if some species are loss. Furthermore, some individuals believe that, due to loss of plants, natural cycle of environment may disturb. In addition to this, sometimes it may also invite some issue such as global warming. Thus, one should have to accept the fact that, loss of particular breed of plants and animals have detrimental effects on environment.
On the other hand, some people believe that, there are plenty other essential factors, which causes surrounding issues. Increment in population, traffic as well as industry may also affect badly to nature. Nowadays, air and noise pollution is increase because traffic rate is more compared to past. Some of the industries are also responsible for water pollution. So, individuals belive that water, air and noise pollution also plays vital role which diminish our nature. Therefore, one can say that, apart from loss of some species of plant and animals, there are other causes which also impact on our environment.
To conclude, environmental problem occurs due to drop in certain types of flora and fauna as well as other reason like pollution. My solidarity goes with the fact that, decrease in lives like animals and plants may affect most on environment and create environmental problem. I recommend to people that, save environment by saving endangered animals and plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, in addition, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32371794872 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79170714446 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8446281923 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7058823529 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3529411765 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47058823529 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375811841194 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115416293226 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916767096829 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236265750163 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690320934805 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.