Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular
species of plants and animals, others say that there are more important environmental
problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays there are many environmental problems that draw the attention of people around the world. Many people believe the most likely problem is that the extinction of specific species of vegetation or animals whilst I strongly agree with those who reckon there are many other probable issues that are more serious, air pollution for example.
Turning to the belief that species extinction is the main environmental problem. Because of the influence of human’s activity, many plants or animals are becoming endangered. This, therefore, can lead to habitat loss or an unbalanced ecosystem. If some agricultural animals are being lost, it may affect the human’s food supply or cause the lack of daily nutrients.
On the other hand, I agree with the other view. Besides the loss of species, there are many more important issues, which can directly and quickly affect to people’s health as well as the Earth. Namely, air pollution or water pollution do have myriad devastating effects on the environment and human beings. It is caused by deforestation or the lack of people’s awareness. And it is obvious that air pollution causes not only many health’s problems but also the degradation of environmental quality. Furthermore, it can be one of the main causes of global warming, which is known as the most burning concern of our time.
In conclusion, the lack of some species is one of the environmental problems but there are many more significant issues that need to be urgently solved. For instance, air pollution or water pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14682539683 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85333465344 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531746031746 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6220922656 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.57142857143 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269520053601 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094987401486 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714055453128 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171514007509 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.010774253603 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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