Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. First opinion i think our human need to have the mind to protect rare plant and animals but that have some problem because most of them can't make the pollution better for me carbonic are the first problem of enviroment human need to deal with them so i thinks second opinion are better, there are very much problem like carbonic or some pandemic from eviroment, that from our mind like someone can burn jungle from 1 days but when you want to heal that jungle for our oxygen you need 1 hundred and that can be 1 thounsand years.
In the other hand. plants and animals are goods for enviroment like some tree can change the carbonic into oxygen so that good for enviroment. enviroment can make we have life but also can take that life from we so our mind need to protect animals and plants to avoid that bad situation. all of we know some animals like rhino can be extinction maybe your favorite animals can have that situation so come somewhere and make every people have the mind to protect our life our earth that also my home.
In conclusion, i prefer second opinion because there a lot of problem not just animal and plants and i want to say that every people make the little things and we have safe earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t environmental problems. First opinion i think our human need to have the mind t...
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Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... have some problem because most of them cant make the pollution better for me carbon...
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Line 1, column 440, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...oment human need to deal with them so i thinks second opinion are better, there are ve...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'problems'?
Suggestion: problems
...opinion are better, there are very much problem like carbonic or some pandemic from evi...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Plants
... 1 thounsand years. In the other hand. plants and animals are goods for enviroment li...
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Suggestion: Enviroment
...nto oxygen so that good for enviroment. enviroment can make we have life but also can take...
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Suggestion: All
...and plants to avoid that bad situation. all of we know some animals like rhino can ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...arth that also my home. In conclusion, i prefer second opinion because there a l...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
..., i prefer second opinion because there a lot of problem not just animal and plants and i want t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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... problem not just animal and plants and i want to say that every people make the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1144.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4862745098 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2224605793 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.462745098039 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.58497304 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.0 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312734018041 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196294809636 0.084324248473 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.17880820284 0.0667982634062 268% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218214677458 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104838429052 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 78.4519038076 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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