Many people are working longer and longer hours. Why is this happening? What problems can this cause to people?
In this day and age, many people are likely to increase their working times due to many compelling reasons and the effects of this phenomenon are controversial. This essay will examine the question of the purpose for this issue and suggest some probable problems that workers might encounter.
There are many reasons for workers to work hard more but the most probable cause is the money. Firstly, it is obvious that such people will be paid off for what they have done, the more hard-working they are, the more money they will get. Employees work harder and harder because once they are wealthy, it is much easier for them to live a more enjoyable life. For instance, they can get what they want, visit where they are interested, or even can build a long-term relationship with their partner. In addition, they want to provide a better life to their nearest and dearest without any hesitation or difficulty. Secondly, for those who truly love their career and merely want to pursue their passion, they actually do not really care about anything else in fact. This probably can either lead to the possibility of moving up the career ladder or be one of the motivations to push them through many adversities and difficulties.
Besides, there are many serious drawbacks in both physical and mental health if such people overwork. For example, officers might suffer from some serious eyes problems due to the long time that they glue their eyes to the computer screens, or for those who work outdoor they might encounter some respiratory diseases. Moreover, this issue can lead to mental health problems such as stress, irritation, or frustration out of their exertion. As a result, there will be an increase in some society’s vices.
In conclusion, there are many benefits that can be gained by working hard though, workers should consider having a work-life balance in order to have a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93788819876 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53375042336 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546583850932 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9917791067 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224707124202 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860464960232 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719913024995 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161212370484 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788854825055 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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