We are facing innumerable environmental issues in today's world. To some, the extinction of species of flora and fauna is a major concern while others think that there are more demanding problems in our world. This essay will discuss both the views before reaching to the conclusion.
The supporters of the former view have many reasons to be concerned about the loss of species of wildlife and plants as it also means the loss of important genes. To explicate, as there are not much lions left in the world today, which means the rare breed has rare genes of traits such as leadership, courage, strength and the ability to hunt alone, which might be lost with their extinction. Also, due to unreasonably dangerous human activities such as deforestation and rising carbon footprints is causing plant species to die. For example, the venus fly trap and berries are no longer found the southern American states. Moreover, the massive loss of some plants and animals can cause imbalance in the nature which can lead to environmental catastrophe on a global scale. This phenomenon can lead to humans facing dire consequences.
On the other hand, second section of society claims thay there are more serious matters around the World. First of all, the rising pollution and radiations are having detrimental effects on the planet. Health of the public is deteriorating on a faster pace leading to higher number of people having deadly diseases such as cancer. Furthermore, the inexorable and climatic changes are causing disasters all over the globe, which is certainly irreversible. Floods, tsunamis and earthquakes are usual things nowadays. Melting glaciers are causing the sea level to rise which means less land is available to the over-growing population. Also, 70 percent the land available for agriculture on this planet is no more fertile, which has led to the issue of food scarcity, as was reported by the health department of the UN, New York.
In conclusion, both opinions have their own importance to raise concern among people, as discussed in the essay. As far as my opinion is concerned, I subscribe to the theory that other problems such as increasing pollution, radical climatic changes and over population require more attention than extinction of species of plants and animals as together with the loss of some species, other newer ones are getting introduced in the environment too. Still, all these problems require strenuous efforts to solve.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, still, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2065.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11138613861 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73513283451 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576732673267 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 637.2 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.2499673339 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.684210526 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2631578947 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42105263158 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248851533785 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639476419099 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665733828235 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161958385741 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911090961773 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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