Several environmental problems are taken into account nowadays. While I reckon that the focal issue of today’s generation is the extinction of particular creatures, I strongly believe that other serious problems need to be considered.
On the one hand, I regard the loss of biodiversity as a burning issue nowadays. As the Earth is getting warmer, some natural habitats of wildlife creatures have become inhospitable to live. Along with the excessive poaching of hunters for meat, furs, and feathers, a large number of species have been driven to the verge of extinction. As creatures play a crucial role in balancing the ecosystem, The loss of any single species can lead to the disorder of the food chain as well as the environment, in general. Therefore, it is reasonable to assert that the loss of biodiversity can have destructive impacts on the environment.
On the other hand, I strongly believe that there are some environmental problems that need to be concerned. One of these issues is global warming and climate change. Climate change has resulted in disastrous consequences for every creature’s life. As more calamities occur frequently such as floods, droughts, deadly summer heat waves, etc, more and more people have lost their homes, and numerous hectares of forest have been wiped out. Along with these destructive hazards, Global warming has also led to the loss of coastal lands and cities as the sea level is rising dramatically. Many scientists have predicted that by 2050 almost the entire region of Southern Vietnam will be immersed in the sea. Therefore, I believe that today’s generations have to face up with various environmental problems.
In conclusion, the extinction of species, as well as climate change, global warming, and other issues, are threatening the existence of human beings and the balance of the environment. Therefore, it is imperative to protect the environment and live in harmony with the Earth.
- Scientists believe that the increasing average temperature is an issue What caused global warming and present solution to reduce its effect 85
- People are consuming more and more sugar based drinks Why What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption 89
- Some children spend hours everyday on their smartphones Why is this the case Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
- It is often said that governments spend too much money on projects to protect wildlife while there are other problems that are more important Do you agree or disagree 73
- In some countries online shopping is now replacing shopping in stores Do you think it is a negative or positive development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...f hunters for meat, furs, and feathers, a large number of species have been driven to the verge o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, while, i reckon, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21904761905 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9432115675 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546031746032 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5733068657 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.75 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188839203838 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615788673084 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543296083425 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11497686288 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386967773141 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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