Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is obvious that nowadays, our worldwide ecosystem is in great danger. While many people argue that the principal environmental problem is the loss of common species of plants and animals, I am with those who believe that such important environmental issues are caused by many reasons.
On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments that the disappearance of plants is the main cause of environmental issue. To use a common example of this practice, many people are cutting down a large area of forest for farming and raising some kinds of domestic animals like goat, bull, sheep, etc. This action harms directly for our environment, causing the lack water and the loss of forest animals habitations. In addition, opponents also argue that the loss of specific species of animals is also the main reason why our environment is damaged. Many people, for instance, are hunting rare animals not only for selling meat, skin, wolf or ivory, but also for relaxing.
On the other hand, others believe that there are lots of important environmental issues happening nowadays. Firstly, climate change is recognized as one of the main issue. Some phenomena such as typhoon, tidal wave, hurricane and flood are caused by climate change, demolishing people’s accommodation and crops. There are countless instances of these from the last two decades; however, the tsunami affecting mainly Indonesia, Malaysia and Thailand in the year 2004 is a particular striking example. Secondly, Some factories have continued to release chemical waste into rivers and litter trash in public area, regardless of the government implements policy on protecting and improving environment. These behaviors could have some negative influences on citizens’ lives because of the filthy habitation. Personally, I agree that plants and animals; extinction is the fundamental environment matter, but I fell that climate change and pollution are also some main causes. If people globally don’t stop damaging ecosystem or surroundings, human being also are effected seriously.
In conclusion, there are a lot of principal environmental problems harming for our lives like climate change, pollution and plants and animals’ extinction. I also believe that protecting surroundings is the responsibility of each individuals around the world to create a better life.
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- The assessments of the student’s learning outcomes are the main way to collect their progress in educational courses. It is said that students’ ability should be assessed basing on their performance on a test at the end of course. To what extend, do y 78
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd the world to create a better life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2006.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49589041096 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9763766209 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564383561644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7553252937 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05882352941 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252024464288 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771946523024 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584523896933 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156602956235 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051101108699 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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