Loss of ecosystem is the main environmental problem of nowadays ,As others believe there are more crucial environmental challenges.This essay addresses different things affecting the environment ,as well as other things that are crucial than the environment itself.
Environmental degradation result in loss of biodiversity.Morever this causes formation of gullies which cause falling of trees and this leads to death of trees.For example in most African countries when they see a fallen tree they cut it for firewood.The rule of law for cutting of trees is not effective due to corruption.Poaching is the other main cause of decrease in wild animals,however this might be due to poor maintainance of game parks and corrruption between the poachers and parks officers.
In addition, all these human errors for example water pollution result in death of sea creatures like fish or crocodiles.Veld fire destroys both animals and plants which result in loss of ecosytem.There are some natural disasters like floods which destroys both plants and animals which is due to climate changes.
However, there are more crucial problems than the environment itself like building houses or construction of bridges.Furthermore, cutting down of trees is necessary when creating a space for building a house.Killing of animals that are a threat to human population might be a necessary evil to save humankind.As well as cutting down of trees to construct a bridge is also necessary like in India after it was damaged by a landslide.
In my own opinion, I believe the problem of our time is due to loss of ecosystem which is caused by human errors.Corruption must end and anyone who commit any harm to the environment should be brought to justice.Plants and animals controls the environment hence loss of them lead to global warming.
- The first graph below shows the weight in tonnes of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013 and also the amount in tonnes of fertiliser used The second graph shows the volome of rainfall in each month in millilitres 54
- The pie chart below shows the main reason why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how there causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and mak 67
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. 67
- The government should reduce the amount of money spent on local environmental problems and instead increase funding into urgent and more threatning issues such as global warming. 78
- The bar chart below shows figures of annual coffee and meat consumption. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26712328767 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41071820683 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.787304225 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 307.6 106.682146367 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4 20.7667163134 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164803723461 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907180847071 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487714977762 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0907180847071 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487714977762 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.0946893788 249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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