some people say that the main environmental problem of out time is the loss of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
There is no doubt that currently we are living in a society where the issues relating to the environment are rising rapidly. According to some people, the number one environmental problem us the loss of different species of creatures whereas others believe many other conditions relating the environment are ore serious than that.
Although we are blessed with numerous species of plants and animals we can only manipulate a few for the economic benefit. The profitable plants and animas are being fed and bred on a regular basis compared to the other animals which are often neglected. Furthermore, wild animals like tigers or lions are now caged in zoos for public display all round the world. As a result, these animals are loosing their breeding capacity as they are spending their entire lives without any contact from the nature. For instances, the panda, a popular and once ubiquitous animal all over China, has reduced to a handful in number and now only seen in protective care as they have lost their homes. Moreover, when the number of predators are lowered in the wild (as they are poached), number of herbivores increases and as they eat most of greens in the forest, only dry twig remains which is one of the top reason for wild fires. In addition, as the population of the world is sky-rocketing, forests are being destroyed in order to make more lands available for accommodation and farming. This type of actions will eventually lead to deforestation and desertification of many parts of the planet and will cause tremendous loss of biodiversity.
On the other hand, we have issues like pollution, climate change and global warming which possess a serious threat to the humankind. Pollution is consistently increasing in urban regions. The more population increases in towns and cities, the more buildings and roads will be constructed. It means more vehicles will be seen on the roads as well. As a consequence, air pollution along with noise pollution will increase. Some studies have associated living in polluted air with lung cancer and noise pollution can lead to heart diseases. Besides, more factories are being developed to support the demand of the raising population. The factories would end up releasing their wastes, often toxic, into the environment. Additionally, the factories would release greenhouse gases which is responsible for increasing global temperature and subsequently changing the climate.
I believe both of the statements are true and correct on their own. Neglecting one aspect of the nature would have a drastic impact on the entire planet and may even become the reason for human extinction.
In conclusion, both the government and the public should come forward to safe the endangered species of organisms and help out the world from its ailing condition. Policy makers should keep in mind to reduce pollution in different parts of a nation as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 819, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the greens') or simply say ''most greens''.
Suggestion: most of the greens; most greens
...of herbivores increases and as they eat most of greens in the forest, only dry twig remains wh...
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Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... increases in towns and cities, the more buildings and roads will be constructed....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2433.0 1615.20841683 151% => OK
No of words: 478.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.089958159 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78725239829 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 176.041082164 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531380753138 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 769.5 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.370880623 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.782608696 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7826086957 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133176946501 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0332427983809 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443196128841 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064376728345 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544835917554 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 78.4519038076 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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